For Hung Kye's group, they could have shot the first shot like we could see the both face, or we could take two pictures to show their face. They could have maybe consider on the speech for them. They should also take the main ones . The image was a bit blur. Maybe there is too much picture on the same picture. The pictures in the video should not take long at least it should appear for 1 seconds. You would not need to repeat it too much..
Hamid and Hung Kye the story board is detailed but the storyline is quite 'boring' and doesn't have any twists in the story , good but could be done better
ZhiAn & Zhi An: Simple storyline, but the last part could do a little better. Was the dog still there? Not very clear to some audience when seeing it the first time round.
Dominic and Darren: It's weird, the soldier started the war and the moment General Price says stop the war, the soldier stops the war. Apart from that, good job!
Dominic and Darren: quite a cute idea and storyboard. nice pictures too. But a bit no link. i do not really understand why the General Price suddenly asks his soldiers to stop shooting and then they live happily ever after again (playing soccer)...
Simple and quite funny storyline :) Could make it longer like both the bears fought over the hanburger, then both did not win and realised that they should share and that sharing is much better. Like the story, funny :D
Nice Story but Saishwar you spoke too hast and erm your voice was a little too low, so some part of the explanation i cannot hear. But, not bad. Keep up the good work
Ragul & Nathaniel: Good message on road safety! But might want to vary your shots, intersperse them with close up and high-angle shots too! Could also try to reduce the blurness of some of the shots.
The ALL Ladies team: Hmm...hanging storyline...but need to inform the audience that it is hanging! Can add in one more shot that says something like...'To be continued...' or something like that! Creative idea on making your story 'incomplete'. :D
Cameron's team: Good use of colours (B&W too!), and the storyline is different! :D
ReplyDeleteFor Cameron's group i do not really understand what is the B&W for as it would be fine for it to be normal.
ReplyDeleteThe characters especially the pig are kinda cute and erm nice story u hav there.
ReplyDeleteCameron and Nicholas:
ReplyDeleteTheir pictures vary in color, from black and white to color. I do not quite get the story.
Not bad. Interesting storyboard .(Nick and Cam)
ReplyDeleteThey have the basic idea clearly pointed out
ReplyDeleteit is very very cute.
ReplyDeletefor cameron: nice script! overall looks good :)
ReplyDeleteNice colour and storyline! B&W means Black & White i think. Like the story.
ReplyDeletenice Nicolas!
ReplyDeleteHung Kye & Hamidsha- Ben 10...nice. Good photography from ground level. Humongosaur so powerful!!!!
ReplyDeleteCameron and Nicholas's story is good.
ReplyDeletehamidshah: very confusing script???
ReplyDelete@Cameron Nice storyline!BUt it could be longer
ReplyDeleteCameron's:characters are cute and the entire thing is funny
ReplyDeleteHamidshah & HungKye: Good photography and good use of some 'special' yet simple effects! But can add more value by adding in some description boxes.
ReplyDeleteCameron & Nicholas: the story was good :D and the pig is so cute!!! ^^
ReplyDeleteShows Humongosaurs size by taking a picture from his legs.
ReplyDeleteHamidshah & HungKye: Good video clip effort. But not too sure whether the song is appropriate. An epic fight but the song is a happy song! Hmmm...
ReplyDeletethe pictures are not so good but I like the storyline.
ReplyDeleteFor Hung Kye's group, they could have shot the first shot like we could see the both face, or we could take two pictures to show their face.
ReplyDeleteThey could have maybe consider on the speech for them.
They should also take the main ones .
The image was a bit blur.
Maybe there is too much picture on the same picture.
The pictures in the video should not take long at least it should appear for 1 seconds.
You would not need to repeat it too much..
Hamid and Hung Kye wierd story but still interesting LOL Shots are slightly too bright.
ReplyDeleteHamidshah and Hung Kye:
ReplyDeleteLike the movie and the storyboard. The movie is funny and the storyboard is detailed. :) Good Job!
@Hamidshah Awesome work! Nice storyline and good effort Good Job!
ReplyDeleteNice characters and I like the the part where you made humongosaur grow very huge to kick Nanomech!!! Cool!!!
ReplyDeleteHungkye and Hamidshah: Hamidshah's voice is too soft. but other than that, EPIC fighting!
ReplyDeleteBoth of them are able to capture all the minor shots to make the entire thing looks much better
ReplyDeleteMaybe a different song but not so bad too... Funny way they do the vid. But, nice vid! Nice vid!
ReplyDeleteHung Kye and Hamidshah: I like how you used perspective in your story.
ReplyDeleteHung Kye's:The storyboard is funny and I like the part where humongosaur just throws swampfire behind lol.
ReplyDeletecameron's team : very nice and good idea.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, the credits must be flipped over as Swampfire does not act as Hamidshah in the clip. Same for the rest.
ReplyDelete@hamidshah&hung kye lol haha nice special effects on the toys.
ReplyDeletenice cacapo!
ReplyDeletehamid and hung kye : super funny and cool, awesome!
ReplyDeleteI like the way they take the close up shots on the Monsters too :D
ReplyDeleteHamidshah & Hung Kye: The perspectives for the shots are good.
ReplyDeleteHamid and Hung Kye the story board is detailed but the storyline is quite 'boring' and doesn't have any twists in the story , good but could be done better
ReplyDeleteAlvin and Zhi An: The dog flying on the broom is sooooo cute!!!
ReplyDelete@Alvin good Story but can be made longer
ReplyDelete!)Get a microphone not a pencil.
ReplyDeleteI don't like the words tilting it is confusing.
3.I don't understand the story.
Not enough explanation how the dog got down. It could be longer but good job!
ReplyDeleteAlvin an Zhi An good effort
ReplyDeleteZhiAn & Zhi An: Simple storyline, but the last part could do a little better. Was the dog still there? Not very clear to some audience when seeing it the first time round.
ReplyDeleteAlvin and Zhi An:
ReplyDeleteFunny twist of the story, as the toad seemingly knows everything but did not know how to stop the broom. :)
Alvin and Zhi An: Er... i don't quite get the last part. but, good effort :D
ReplyDeleteThe first team did very well. Because they did not have enough toys, but they did it.
ReplyDeleteA twist of the story lights up the mood
ReplyDeleteAlvin & Zhi An: The storyline was funny! :) & the dog was so cute on the broom!
ReplyDelete@Cameron and Nicholas nice story
ReplyDeletevery nice, sooooooooooooo cute! good job!
ReplyDeleteDominic and Darren- Nice variation of toys.
ReplyDelete@Dominic Nice pictures but make it more interesting
ReplyDeleteDominic & Darren: Simple story. Could do with more drama though! :D
ReplyDeletedominic: nice story
ReplyDeleteDom and Darren you should have a twist in the story
ReplyDeleteDominic and Darren: Awesome storyline. quite hilarious. ^^
ReplyDeletevery cute and nice, but could be more detailed, great job!
ReplyDeleteThe third team's story was like a fable.
ReplyDeletetoo short and not enough description but still not bad
ReplyDeleteDominic and Darren:
ReplyDeleteFunny story, good storyboard but could you make it a bit more detailed?
@dominic nice but i think it can somehow be improve so that it can be a better story.
ReplyDeleteThe D's production was quite good but kind of slow
ReplyDeleteNice story but I don't think a little talking could stop the war.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, but not much description...
ReplyDeleteDominic and Darren: It's weird, the soldier started the war and the moment General Price says stop the war, the soldier stops the war. Apart from that, good job!
ReplyDelete@cacapo: yes it can =.=
ReplyDeleteDominic and Darren: quite a cute idea and storyboard. nice pictures too. But a bit no link. i do not really understand why the General Price suddenly asks his soldiers to stop shooting and then they live happily ever after again (playing soccer)...
ReplyDelete@Darren team good pictures and a simple but funny story
ReplyDeleteNice story but I can't understand anti virus 2 and anti virus 1 thingy....
ReplyDeleteDominic and darren
ReplyDeleteIt is a little weird that the commander is so powerful
I did not know hackers looook soooo cute!
ReplyDeletePravin & Yong Hong: Cute hacker! And I like the storyline too! Could be used for CyberWellness next time, with some minor changes.
ReplyDeleteYong Hong and Pravin: Good idea with the anti-virus thing.
ReplyDeleteThe hacker is so cuttttte!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletePravin and Yong Hong: Cute hacker. haha. quite a nice storyboard. :)
ReplyDeletepravin and yong hong: very confusing the script -.=''
ReplyDeletecute characters
ReplyDeleteThe fourth team was ok and how did the general stop the war ????
ReplyDeletePravin and Yong Hong It is quite inappropriate for a cute bear to be a hacker. You need a bit more Drama
ReplyDeletelol, nice story, it was really cute.
ReplyDeleteHAHA, nice idea of Anti-Virus 2! Invisible, invincible. Not bad
ReplyDeleteThe fifth team had used themselves in the story and an invisible anti-virus.
ReplyDeleteIt was great and the hacker is sooo cute! lol
Isaac & Sean: Nice touching story. But could be better if we make the beggar bear look more like a beggar too.
ReplyDeleteI like the story but it is kind of short though.
ReplyDelete@Sean Heartwarming Story the Characters are cute!
ReplyDeleteThe sixth team's story was short and sweet.
ReplyDeleteIt is strange becoming friends with a beggar!
ReplyDelete@pravin&yong hong nice use of ur mac
ReplyDeleteSean and Isaac: The beggar bear should be the smaller one.
ReplyDeleteToo short...
ReplyDeleteSean and Isaac: Simple yet good storyboard.. nice cute bears sharing the hamburger. haha. Keep It Up! :)
ReplyDeleteIssac and sean
ReplyDeleteOK----
nice storyboard
cute bear
Simple and quite funny storyline :) Could make it longer like both the bears fought over the hanburger, then both did not win and realised that they should share and that sharing is much better. Like the story, funny :D
ReplyDeleteNice story. However, the burger seems normal size for the beggar bear...
ReplyDelete@Sean group good story about friendship
ReplyDeleteerm its kinda rare that a stranger becomes friend with a beggar.. but overall its nice.
ReplyDeleteDominic and Darren:cute TNT bomb and characters
ReplyDeleteSean & Isaac: The bears are so cute! :) but i think that it would be better to have the beggar bear as the smaller one.
ReplyDeleteNEVER TALK TO STRANGERS haha
ReplyDeletenot much of a detail
ReplyDeleteCameron it is possible for them to have friendship.
ReplyDeleteThere is a show (chinese) a begger married a princess
Jun Wei and Guo Jin: Very nice shot 2.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds strange!
ReplyDeleteJun Wei and Guo Jin: awww.. Cute cute storyboard! But could improve on some of the pictures though..
ReplyDeleteGuo Jin and Jun Wei Nice Story Nice ending
ReplyDeletePravin and Yong hong:cute ruffles the hacker and the anti virus system is awesome
ReplyDeleteJun Wei & Guo Jin: Simple storyline, but good effort. But the dinosaur could be made more scary too, maybe add in some dialogue or description boxes!
ReplyDelete@junwei & guo jin. nice story cute dinosaur.
ReplyDelete@jun wei group nice story about friendship
ReplyDeleteFunny Story! Nice way you guy attempt to drop the dinosaur. BTW, Sasuke can easily kill that dinosaur haha. Anyway, nice storyline :)
ReplyDelete@JUn Weis ossum story keep it up
ReplyDeleteThe seventh team's story was cool and i liked the shot 2. I and Hungkye tried to do it but we couldn't.
ReplyDeleteJun Wei and Guo Jin:
ReplyDeleteDid the dinosaur stay in space before the gravity on Earth pull it down?
Guo jin and Junwei:cute dinosaur and human,and nice storyboard!
ReplyDeleteHe happened to float into space when the disaster that wiped out all the dinosaurs happened. If that can happen, we can create even more dinosaurs!
ReplyDeleteThe timing that you took the photo was very good(shot 2). The "Alien" is very cuteAnd I thought the Tim was Sasuke from "NARUTO"?
ReplyDeletePrinceton & Ming Yang: A very morbid storyline! But good use of white board as part of your background and props for your shots/scenes.
ReplyDelete@Ming Yang sad story =( sob..
ReplyDelete@ming yang nice story against smoking
ReplyDeletePrinceton and Ming Yang:
ReplyDeleteThe ending is a bit quick and sudden. Poor panda...:(
ming yang
ReplyDeleteIdea is awesome and awesome
Ming Yang and Princeton: Sad...how Dragon died......but Panda is way bigger than the car.
ReplyDeleteNice storyboard! Ming Yang and Princeton!
ReplyDeleteBut the panda did not spoke!!!!!Panda so cute!DOES NOT DESERVE TO DIE!
ReplyDeleteNICE! How did you do that mouse thing!!! Cool man, so awesome. Can teach me. BTW, nice story, very funny actually! :)
ReplyDeleteMing Yang and Princeton: LOL!! Interesting story. The message conveyed is very strong. :) Keep it up :D
ReplyDeletePure Awesoneness
ReplyDeleteBut could have done better
Ming yang
jun wei's group have a pretty good description
ReplyDeleteSaishwar & Marcellus: Another 'violent' story? But Gizmo is a bit too cute to be a 'bad' character.
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ReplyDelete@Saishwar why did Ferrari bear pretend to die??
ReplyDeleteSaishwar and Marc:
ReplyDeleteNice story but I thought the terminator will shoot Gizmo first?
:)
Very weird story,Saishwar...
ReplyDeletefunny twist....i like it
ReplyDeleteSaishwar and Marcellus: Nice pictures. :D could add more drama though.. Good effort :)
ReplyDeleteThe eight team was nice as at last the fer came alive and terminator died it was very cool!!
ReplyDeleteSaishwar and Marcellus: Why so much fighting and dying?
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ReplyDeleteNice Story but Saishwar you spoke too hast and erm your voice was a little too low, so some part of the explanation i cannot hear. But, not bad. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteThe pictures aren't clear Ragu!
ReplyDeletelol, nice story, soo funny
ReplyDeleteVery blur(Ragul)
ReplyDeleteI think they should not jaywalk!
ReplyDeletegraphic needs to be better but story is not bad
ReplyDeleteRagul & Nathaniel: Good message on road safety! But might want to vary your shots, intersperse them with close up and high-angle shots too! Could also try to reduce the blurness of some of the shots.
ReplyDeletegoood job , lol, u rawkz
ReplyDelete@Ragul Balaji Nice story but make it a little more interesting
ReplyDeleteNathaniel and Ragul: Short and sweet. Nice.
ReplyDeleteWhy did all the cars crash into one guy at the same time Kinda Unrealistic LOL
ReplyDeleteNice, easy and simple idea. Good storyline and this time its not about killing and stuff. Hey, is that the General guy? :)
ReplyDeleteLOL. Nathaniel and Ragul: Awesome story. Nice picture of the car moving!
ReplyDeleteNat and Ragul: Good story! But pictures are a bit blur..
ReplyDeleteNice story. I like the part where the cars crashed the guy
ReplyDeleteNathaniel and Ragul:
ReplyDeleteGood ending but you could make the consequences more severe.
Nathaniel's team's story was cool and i liked the picture when the vehicle will hit the police man.
ReplyDeleteYar pic are bit blurr
ReplyDelete@nathaniel and ragul oo wheres the road where the traffic jam happens? oo but overall its good.
ReplyDeletetomatoes aren't that small...Story is incomplete
ReplyDeleteThe 3 Girls: I don't know what the story is about.. But quite nice pictures. :)
ReplyDeleteHaha nice story, how did you get that tomato(apple) picture? Cooll, Hey apple! :)
ReplyDelete@marcellus&saishwar nice story cute soft toys
ReplyDeleteJamie's, Dylaine's and Jean Yee's team's story was awesome but they ended it off half way. :'(
ReplyDeleteJamie,Jean Yee and Dylaine weird Story why in the world would bears want to find out where a tomato came from?
ReplyDeletejust the second slid must have a bigger image of the apple, besides that everything is fine
ReplyDeleteThe ALL Ladies team: Hmm...hanging storyline...but need to inform the audience that it is hanging! Can add in one more shot that says something like...'To be continued...' or something like that! Creative idea on making your story 'incomplete'. :D
ReplyDelete@GIrls Nice story but you kept us In suspense
ReplyDelete:''''(
ReplyDelete3 Girls: i do not get the story
ReplyDeleteThe ending is not nice!
ReplyDelete@girls yea erm agree wif mr irfan on ur story.
ReplyDeleteYes, girls you should end the story, but btw its nice n simple! :)
ReplyDeleteOurs were supposed to end that way...
ReplyDeletelol, nice story , but i wuz confused a little at the bacck part ... LOL nice job anws.. :)
ReplyDelete@Saishwar: If something came down from the sky, its natural to want to find out what it is.
ReplyDelete@Darren: The story is supposed to be a cliffhanger.
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