Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Comments on your classmates' storyboards...

Please use the 'Comments' section in this blog post to comment on your classmates' presentation and presentation boards.

176 comments:

  1. Cameron's team: Good use of colours (B&W too!), and the storyline is different! :D

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  2. For Cameron's group i do not really understand what is the B&W for as it would be fine for it to be normal.

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  3. The characters especially the pig are kinda cute and erm nice story u hav there.

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  4. Cameron and Nicholas:
    Their pictures vary in color, from black and white to color. I do not quite get the story.

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  5. Not bad. Interesting storyboard .(Nick and Cam)

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  6. They have the basic idea clearly pointed out

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  7. for cameron: nice script! overall looks good :)

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  8. Nice colour and storyline! B&W means Black & White i think. Like the story.

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  9. Hung Kye & Hamidsha- Ben 10...nice. Good photography from ground level. Humongosaur so powerful!!!!

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  10. Cameron and Nicholas's story is good.

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  11. hamidshah: very confusing script???

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  12. @Cameron Nice storyline!BUt it could be longer

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  13. Cameron's:characters are cute and the entire thing is funny

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  14. Hamidshah & HungKye: Good photography and good use of some 'special' yet simple effects! But can add more value by adding in some description boxes.

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  15. Cameron & Nicholas: the story was good :D and the pig is so cute!!! ^^

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  16. Shows Humongosaurs size by taking a picture from his legs.

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  17. Hamidshah & HungKye: Good video clip effort. But not too sure whether the song is appropriate. An epic fight but the song is a happy song! Hmmm...

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  18. the pictures are not so good but I like the storyline.

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  19. For Hung Kye's group, they could have shot the first shot like we could see the both face, or we could take two pictures to show their face.
    They could have maybe consider on the speech for them.
    They should also take the main ones .
    The image was a bit blur.
    Maybe there is too much picture on the same picture.
    The pictures in the video should not take long at least it should appear for 1 seconds.
    You would not need to repeat it too much..

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  20. Hamid and Hung Kye wierd story but still interesting LOL Shots are slightly too bright.

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  21. Hamidshah and Hung Kye:
    Like the movie and the storyboard. The movie is funny and the storyboard is detailed. :) Good Job!

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  22. @Hamidshah Awesome work! Nice storyline and good effort Good Job!

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  23. Nice characters and I like the the part where you made humongosaur grow very huge to kick Nanomech!!! Cool!!!

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  24. Hungkye and Hamidshah: Hamidshah's voice is too soft. but other than that, EPIC fighting!

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  25. Both of them are able to capture all the minor shots to make the entire thing looks much better

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  26. Maybe a different song but not so bad too... Funny way they do the vid. But, nice vid! Nice vid!

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  27. Hung Kye and Hamidshah: I like how you used perspective in your story.

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  28. Hung Kye's:The storyboard is funny and I like the part where humongosaur just throws swampfire behind lol.

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  29. cameron's team : very nice and good idea.

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  30. By the way, the credits must be flipped over as Swampfire does not act as Hamidshah in the clip. Same for the rest.

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  31. @hamidshah&hung kye lol haha nice special effects on the toys.

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  32. hamid and hung kye : super funny and cool, awesome!

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  33. I like the way they take the close up shots on the Monsters too :D

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  34. Hamidshah & Hung Kye: The perspectives for the shots are good.

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  35. Hamid and Hung Kye the story board is detailed but the storyline is quite 'boring' and doesn't have any twists in the story , good but could be done better

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  36. Alvin and Zhi An: The dog flying on the broom is sooooo cute!!!

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  37. @Alvin good Story but can be made longer

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  38. !)Get a microphone not a pencil.
    I don't like the words tilting it is confusing.
    3.I don't understand the story.

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  39. Not enough explanation how the dog got down. It could be longer but good job!

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  40. ZhiAn & Zhi An: Simple storyline, but the last part could do a little better. Was the dog still there? Not very clear to some audience when seeing it the first time round.

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  41. Alvin and Zhi An:
    Funny twist of the story, as the toad seemingly knows everything but did not know how to stop the broom. :)

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  42. Alvin and Zhi An: Er... i don't quite get the last part. but, good effort :D

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  43. The first team did very well. Because they did not have enough toys, but they did it.

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  44. A twist of the story lights up the mood

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  45. Alvin & Zhi An: The storyline was funny! :) & the dog was so cute on the broom!

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  46. @Cameron and Nicholas nice story

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  47. very nice, sooooooooooooo cute! good job!

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  48. Dominic and Darren- Nice variation of toys.

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  49. @Dominic Nice pictures but make it more interesting

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  50. Dominic & Darren: Simple story. Could do with more drama though! :D

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  51. Dom and Darren you should have a twist in the story

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  52. Dominic and Darren: Awesome storyline. quite hilarious. ^^

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  53. very cute and nice, but could be more detailed, great job!

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  54. The third team's story was like a fable.

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  55. too short and not enough description but still not bad

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  56. Dominic and Darren:
    Funny story, good storyboard but could you make it a bit more detailed?

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  57. @dominic nice but i think it can somehow be improve so that it can be a better story.

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  58. The D's production was quite good but kind of slow

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  59. Nice story but I don't think a little talking could stop the war.

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  60. Very nice, but not much description...

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  61. Dominic and Darren: It's weird, the soldier started the war and the moment General Price says stop the war, the soldier stops the war. Apart from that, good job!

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  62. Dominic and Darren: quite a cute idea and storyboard. nice pictures too. But a bit no link. i do not really understand why the General Price suddenly asks his soldiers to stop shooting and then they live happily ever after again (playing soccer)...

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  63. @Darren team good pictures and a simple but funny story

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  64. Nice story but I can't understand anti virus 2 and anti virus 1 thingy....

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  65. Dominic and darren
    It is a little weird that the commander is so powerful

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  66. I did not know hackers looook soooo cute!

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  67. Pravin & Yong Hong: Cute hacker! And I like the storyline too! Could be used for CyberWellness next time, with some minor changes.

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  68. Yong Hong and Pravin: Good idea with the anti-virus thing.

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  69. Pravin and Yong Hong: Cute hacker. haha. quite a nice storyboard. :)

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  70. pravin and yong hong: very confusing the script -.=''

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  71. The fourth team was ok and how did the general stop the war ????

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  72. Pravin and Yong Hong It is quite inappropriate for a cute bear to be a hacker. You need a bit more Drama

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  73. lol, nice story, it was really cute.

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  74. HAHA, nice idea of Anti-Virus 2! Invisible, invincible. Not bad

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  75. The fifth team had used themselves in the story and an invisible anti-virus.
    It was great and the hacker is sooo cute! lol

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  76. Isaac & Sean: Nice touching story. But could be better if we make the beggar bear look more like a beggar too.

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  77. I like the story but it is kind of short though.

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  78. @Sean Heartwarming Story the Characters are cute!

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  79. The sixth team's story was short and sweet.

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  80. It is strange becoming friends with a beggar!

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  81. @pravin&yong hong nice use of ur mac

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  82. Sean and Isaac: The beggar bear should be the smaller one.

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  83. Sean and Isaac: Simple yet good storyboard.. nice cute bears sharing the hamburger. haha. Keep It Up! :)

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  84. Issac and sean

    OK----
    nice storyboard
    cute bear

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  85. Simple and quite funny storyline :) Could make it longer like both the bears fought over the hanburger, then both did not win and realised that they should share and that sharing is much better. Like the story, funny :D

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  86. Nice story. However, the burger seems normal size for the beggar bear...

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  87. @Sean group good story about friendship

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  88. erm its kinda rare that a stranger becomes friend with a beggar.. but overall its nice.

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  89. Dominic and Darren:cute TNT bomb and characters

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  90. Sean & Isaac: The bears are so cute! :) but i think that it would be better to have the beggar bear as the smaller one.

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  91. NEVER TALK TO STRANGERS haha

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  92. Cameron it is possible for them to have friendship.
    There is a show (chinese) a begger married a princess

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  93. Jun Wei and Guo Jin: Very nice shot 2.

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  94. It sounds strange!

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  95. Jun Wei and Guo Jin: awww.. Cute cute storyboard! But could improve on some of the pictures though..

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  96. Guo Jin and Jun Wei Nice Story Nice ending

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  97. Pravin and Yong hong:cute ruffles the hacker and the anti virus system is awesome

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  98. Jun Wei & Guo Jin: Simple storyline, but good effort. But the dinosaur could be made more scary too, maybe add in some dialogue or description boxes!

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  99. @junwei & guo jin. nice story cute dinosaur.

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  100. @jun wei group nice story about friendship

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  101. Funny Story! Nice way you guy attempt to drop the dinosaur. BTW, Sasuke can easily kill that dinosaur haha. Anyway, nice storyline :)

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  102. The seventh team's story was cool and i liked the shot 2. I and Hungkye tried to do it but we couldn't.

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  103. Jun Wei and Guo Jin:
    Did the dinosaur stay in space before the gravity on Earth pull it down?

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  104. Guo jin and Junwei:cute dinosaur and human,and nice storyboard!

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  105. He happened to float into space when the disaster that wiped out all the dinosaurs happened. If that can happen, we can create even more dinosaurs!

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  106. The timing that you took the photo was very good(shot 2). The "Alien" is very cuteAnd I thought the Tim was Sasuke from "NARUTO"?

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  107. Princeton & Ming Yang: A very morbid storyline! But good use of white board as part of your background and props for your shots/scenes.

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  108. @ming yang nice story against smoking

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  109. Princeton and Ming Yang:
    The ending is a bit quick and sudden. Poor panda...:(

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  110. ming yang

    Idea is awesome and awesome

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  111. Ming Yang and Princeton: Sad...how Dragon died......but Panda is way bigger than the car.

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  112. Nice storyboard! Ming Yang and Princeton!

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  113. But the panda did not spoke!!!!!Panda so cute!DOES NOT DESERVE TO DIE!

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  114. NICE! How did you do that mouse thing!!! Cool man, so awesome. Can teach me. BTW, nice story, very funny actually! :)

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  115. Ming Yang and Princeton: LOL!! Interesting story. The message conveyed is very strong. :) Keep it up :D

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  116. Pure Awesoneness

    But could have done better

    Ming yang

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  117. jun wei's group have a pretty good description

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  118. Saishwar & Marcellus: Another 'violent' story? But Gizmo is a bit too cute to be a 'bad' character.

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  120. @Saishwar why did Ferrari bear pretend to die??

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  121. Saishwar and Marc:
    Nice story but I thought the terminator will shoot Gizmo first?
    :)

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  122. Saishwar and Marcellus: Nice pictures. :D could add more drama though.. Good effort :)

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  123. The eight team was nice as at last the fer came alive and terminator died it was very cool!!

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  124. Saishwar and Marcellus: Why so much fighting and dying?

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  126. Nice Story but Saishwar you spoke too hast and erm your voice was a little too low, so some part of the explanation i cannot hear. But, not bad. Keep up the good work

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  127. The pictures aren't clear Ragu!

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  128. lol, nice story, soo funny

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  129. I think they should not jaywalk!

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  130. graphic needs to be better but story is not bad

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  131. Ragul & Nathaniel: Good message on road safety! But might want to vary your shots, intersperse them with close up and high-angle shots too! Could also try to reduce the blurness of some of the shots.

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  132. @Ragul Balaji Nice story but make it a little more interesting

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  133. Nathaniel and Ragul: Short and sweet. Nice.

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  134. Why did all the cars crash into one guy at the same time Kinda Unrealistic LOL

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  135. Nice, easy and simple idea. Good storyline and this time its not about killing and stuff. Hey, is that the General guy? :)

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  136. LOL. Nathaniel and Ragul: Awesome story. Nice picture of the car moving!

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  137. Nat and Ragul: Good story! But pictures are a bit blur..

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  138. Nice story. I like the part where the cars crashed the guy

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  139. Nathaniel and Ragul:
    Good ending but you could make the consequences more severe.

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  140. Nathaniel's team's story was cool and i liked the picture when the vehicle will hit the police man.

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  141. @nathaniel and ragul oo wheres the road where the traffic jam happens? oo but overall its good.

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  142. tomatoes aren't that small...Story is incomplete

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  143. The 3 Girls: I don't know what the story is about.. But quite nice pictures. :)

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  144. Haha nice story, how did you get that tomato(apple) picture? Cooll, Hey apple! :)

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  145. @marcellus&saishwar nice story cute soft toys

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  146. Jamie's, Dylaine's and Jean Yee's team's story was awesome but they ended it off half way. :'(

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  147. Jamie,Jean Yee and Dylaine weird Story why in the world would bears want to find out where a tomato came from?

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  148. just the second slid must have a bigger image of the apple, besides that everything is fine

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  149. The ALL Ladies team: Hmm...hanging storyline...but need to inform the audience that it is hanging! Can add in one more shot that says something like...'To be continued...' or something like that! Creative idea on making your story 'incomplete'. :D

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  150. @GIrls Nice story but you kept us In suspense

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  151. 3 Girls: i do not get the story

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  152. The ending is not nice!

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  153. @girls yea erm agree wif mr irfan on ur story.

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  154. Yes, girls you should end the story, but btw its nice n simple! :)

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  155. Ours were supposed to end that way...

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  156. lol, nice story , but i wuz confused a little at the bacck part ... LOL nice job anws.. :)

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  157. @Saishwar: If something came down from the sky, its natural to want to find out what it is.

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  158. @Darren: The story is supposed to be a cliffhanger.

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